Learning Log

Hi! Hotty,
in English, I made an explanatory text about changing shorelines individually. I need to put our own heading and sub-heading. I can also illustrate to explain it clearly to a grade 4 students or a 9-10 year old child. Everything is going smoothly because I wrote all the explanation first with a pencil and, write it again in a colored pencil so there will be no more errors. The feedback of my buddy is the meaning of the shoreline is not clear to him and Mr. Perico think so too.